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Adrienne Rich - Tonight No Poetry Will Serve

Saw you walking barefoot
taking a long look
at the new moon's eyelid

 

later spread
sleep-fallen, naked in your dark hair
asleep but not oblivious
of the unslept unsleeping
elsewhere

 

Tonight I think
no poetry
will serve

 

Syntax of rendition:

 

verb pilots the plane
adverb modifies action

 

verb force-feeds noun
submerges the subject
noun is choking
verb    disgraced    goes on doing

 

now diagram the sentence